I think you did very well in your project. Your video was very informative on the subject of mobile commputers. I think that the best way to grade you is to give you a scale from 1 to 5 with five being the highest and one being the lowest. In the summary, you made two gramatical errors. I would give you a three. Your movie was pretty detailed. I would give it a four. I really liked all the detail that you put in. Also, the sound effects were very good. It seemed as though that you worked really well together in making the movie. It really showed. I would give you a five on this catagorey. You did this project pretty clear. I would give you a four. There were to many pauses and you didn't speak much. I don't have any questions. Overall, I would give you a three for your project. Good Job.
Matt (Once Again, Super Spell Checked and Added in some stuff by Shawn, and Patrick
When I listened to the videos they were pretty good but, there were some problems. In the movies there was a lot noise. But, the facts were pretty good but, some of my attention had drifted away. I think that you guys did pretty good because you told us the data in ways that kids really understand. Like the phones. Almost everyone in major cities and states have phones so we knew where you were coming from. Next time, You could maybe talk a little clearer and with little or no noise coming from the backround. Another thing you could do next time is try to find knew people to interview, so that you could have more opinions to back up your data. In general, I think you guys did pretty good and they were entertaining and funny. Good job!
Patrick
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