Design and Innovation

.......................... The facts get a 4 out of 4!

Oh my gosh! You had so many easily understood facts it blew me and my partners away.

We have to say that you guys pwn the noobs! (It means you are awesome basically!)

You guys must have  worked really hard. This definelty shows! Are you what they call geniuses!

The Knowledge Comprehension gets a 3 out of 4

The video have amazing questions. They really thought this through.

Many of the questions they asked were relevant to their subject.

The anwsers were relevant also. I have to say anyone could understand this

the way they explained it.

Their grammer and spelling got a 4 out of 4.

Yet again these kids amaze me. They barely spelled anything wrong.

The commas went were they where supposed to be.

They really put effort once again this shows that a third grader did NOT

make this. The grammer and spelling is usually where people mess up but they didn't.

Their Clarity of Expression got a 3 out of 4.

The clarity of expression is described by how the expressions describe.

Clearly, it means it is described by how diverse their adjectives.

Terms like "Technicly speaking" and "distorted" speak for themselves.

The project they did was great. They really put a lot of effort into this. One of their main facts was how it affects business. Another main fact was that they could do communication world wide. The third main fact was that you can get cancers and tumors in the frontal lobe of your brain from avatars and instant messaging.  The accesablilty of this video was terrible. It took forever for it to load, but the video is easy to understand and it is funny. Something that I would add is that wireless cell phones have made people safer. Kids who have cell phones are safer from kidnappers because they can call for help. The first good thing about the wikis is how awesome their facts are. The second thing is how enthusiastic and how funny it was. The third great thing about the wiki is that they were well done. I have two suggestions one is that they should add more links and they should add more pictures for people to easier to understand. The fact that we learned was that avatars and instant messaging cause cancerous tumors in the frontal lobe of the brain.